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Dear Agony

Published: Nov 14, 2011

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Inspired by the song, Give Me A Sign. I LOVE Breaking Benjamin.

Take this life empty inside
I'm already dead. I'll rise to fall again.

I can feel you falling away.
No longer the lost,
No longer the same.
And I can see you
Starting to break
I'll keep you alive
If you show me the way
Forever and ever
The scars will remain.
I'm falling apart.
Please leave me
forever in the dark.
~ Breaking Benjamin

I had to guess on the last sentence cause I didn't QUITE understand him.

I dunno... I was just in a dark mood.

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1279x1886px 2.18 MB

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Jaggerjo12

Sep 4, 2012

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I've been looking everywhere in your gallery for something to critique! Finally I found one. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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(Big Grin)"/>

Okay, please don't think I'm being harsh because this IS an older picture and you da*m sure have gotten batter.

Vison:
I believe it is a little dark for the average picture, but in this one, you made it WORK! It really coinsides with the background and everything. Nice work.

Originality:
I give you a 100% on that. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/l/c…" alt="

" title="clapplz" />

Technique:
Like I said before, you have REALLY inproved tremendously! But still, your technique here blows my mind. Its outstanding that even when you were a beginner like this, you never seiced to amaze me.

Impact:
Impact was huge. I almost passed out from the colores and her death;y expression. Its a wonderful add-on. GOOD JOB!